![]() There are lots and lots of conversations that are totally needless and somehow feel forced and artificial. ![]() It is extremly slow and pacing is really like a turture. Some kind of a hollow puppet who randomly feels like a hero and randomly an medieval version emo boy.Ģ. The main Female Maria is a extremly controlling character and it really goes on nerves and suddenly in the chapter 18 has a 180 change of heart which feels hollow. you can not connect with them in any form and sense, since they’re written simply too plastic. Actually better to say the MC and the main Female Maria are really to some extent insufferable. As mentioned above, characters are extremly unlikeable. There are many things i could talk about, but all of them are less important than 2 major problems in this VN.ġ. Well in this case i’d say we have a relatively interesting base idea for the story, which is really demolished by bad character writing. Firstly i say this “good character Writing can save a bad story, while bad character writing can destroy the best stories.” ![]()
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